Introduction 

-Neutral Sentence 

-Rewrite the statement 

Eg:  In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both the parents to go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income others feel they lack support because of their parents' absence. 

-- In high demanding world to fulfill requirement both parents have to do job. As many people support the view that both working parents will help the family in many ways, this dilemma has become debatable, whilst other think it will impact the child owing to the unavailability of parents.  The essay will address both views.


Body 1

Proponents of + 

( advocate, supporter, exponent, subscriber, )

opine ( to give opinion), moot, put forward, suggest, conjecture, propound, propose, 

General Statement : mention points  (outline what you are going to discuss)

Words link : Firstly, 

Example,

Morever, addition to,

Instance, specimen, sample, case


Body ( other view)

On the flip side---

General Statement

example..

Moreover, 

example 

As Reiterate. In conclusion, In sum up..

Rewrite 

Your main ideas